Fresh Grad Lands Job as Real Estate Agent With Help from Professional Writers

People go to websites to get the information they desperately need. They could be looking for an answer to a nagging question. They might be looking for help in completing an important task. For recent graduates, they might be looking for ways on how to prepare a comprehensive resume that can capture the attention of the hiring manager

Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent. While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume. Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity.

Thus, he sought our assistance in improving editing and proofreading his resume.

In revising his resume, iwritegigs highlighted his soft skills such as his communication skills, ability to negotiate, patience and tactfulness. In the professional experience part, our team added some skills that are aligned with the position he is applying for.

When he was chosen for the real estate agent position, he sent us this thank you note:

“Kudos to the team for a job well done. I am sincerely appreciative of the time and effort you gave on my resume. You did not only help me land the job I had always been dreaming of but you also made me realize how important adding those specific keywords to my resume! Cheers!

Manush’s story shows the importance of using powerful keywords to his resume in landing the job he wanted.

Assume you just wrote the following e-mail message to a subordinate about a presentation. Hey Marilyn, Nice work on that presentation. I’m going to send a copy to the CEO to show off your creativity. Congratulations to you and your team. Speaking of teams, I’m sending a recommendation to Human Resources. Your leadership during the presentation really shows, and you deserve a promotion for all that hard work. A team is only as good as its leader, after all. Before sending the message, it occurs to you that your e-mail will probably be forwarded to other subordinates. What will you need to change to make the message appropriate for both a subordinate and other subordinates?

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Assume you just wrote the following e-mail message to a subordinate about a presentation.
Hey Marilyn,
Nice work on that presentation. I’m going to send a copy to the CEO to show off your creativity. Congratulations to you and your team.
Speaking of teams, I’m sending a recommendation to Human Resources. Your leadership during the presentation really shows, and you deserve a promotion for all that hard work. A team is only as good as its leader, after all.

Before sending the message, it occurs to you that your e-mail will probably be forwarded to other subordinates.
What will you need to change to make the message appropriate for both a subordinate and other subordinates?

A Focus on congratulating the team using each individual’s name and use a more formal tone. Send news about the promotion recommendation in a separate e-mail.

B Make the message even more friendly and informal but focus only on congratulating the team.

C Start with the promotion discussion and use a more formal tone.

This question is taken from Busad 106 – Written Business Communication » Winter 2023 » Chapter 02 Aplia Assignment

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