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Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent.  While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume.  Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity. 

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Week 5 Quiz - WR 1

 

Exigence refers to the motivation behind the argument (both internal and external)

  1. True
  2. False

 

Constraints are the factors that affect an audience’s responses, as well as the author’s manner of presentation that allows them to understand the material limitlessly.

  1. True
  2. False

The rhetorical situation is the relationships between all of the following, except:

  •  
  • Reader/Audience
  • Author/Communicator
  • Context
  1. Context
  2. Text/Message
  3. Reader/Audience
  4. Author/Communicator
  5. Concept

Pathos is related to the words pathetic, sympathy and empathy, meaning that pathos is an appeal to ethics.

  1. True
  2. False

Pathos is an appeal to emotions!

 

Alliteration happens —within a sentence, when a series of words will begin with the same sound

  1. True
  2. False

Personal involvement does not —appeal to the reader because it makes the writer seem more human or involved and writing should be more objective.

  1. True
  2. False

Writing should be objective (for the most part), and so you are encouraged to not personally involved yourself in academic writing.

 

Using your readings for this week, find two moments where Muir uses different rhetorical devices. Quote them from the book and then take a sentence or two for each device to explain which device is being used and what kind of effect it creates for the reader.

  • Example:John Muir uses metaphor throughout his pieces. For example, in “Windstorm in the Forest,” Muir says: “But the winds go to every tree, fingering every leaf and branch and furrowed bole; not one is forgotten.” This use of metaphor makes the reader understand how thoroughly the wind is blowing, but also makes it seem like it isn’t aggressive–it’s more of a caress. This paints a picture for the reader to understand that the wind has a life of its own.
    • This is not from our readings, but if you do choose to write on a metaphor, your explanation must be significantly different from the example.

 

Quiz 6 Answers

1 1

2. 2

3. 5

4. 2

5.  1

6 2

7.

Your Answer:

In “The Ascent of Mount Ritter,” there are these rhetorical devices:

“Now came the solemn, silent evening (65).” This sentence used alliteration to emphasize the quality of night: solemn and silent. It felt like the “s” sound made additional impact too.

“Arriving on the summit of this dividing crest, one of the most exciting pieces of pure wildness was disclosed that the eye of man had ever held (67).” This sentence used emotional language to evoke strong feeling of admiration and appreciation that the readers will feel too.