Question
Time is money in any business environment. To be successful in the business world, you must be able to create concise and easy-to-read messages. As you revise, eliminate flabby expressions, long lead-ins, fillers, redundancies, and empty words. Your audience will appreciate your brevity.
Which of the following sentences contain flabby expressions?
Which of the following sentences contain flabby expressions?
A Alessia will probably be promoted.
He seldom returns text messages.
He seldom returns text messages.
B He seldom returns text messages.
Feel free to help yourself to the delectable desserts in the break room until such time as they are all consumed.
Feel free to help yourself to the delectable desserts in the break room until such time as they are all consumed.
C Feel free to help yourself to the delectable desserts in the break room until such time as they are all consumed.
In the event that Marie calls, please inform her that we will be proceeding along the normal course of events.
In the event that Marie calls, please inform her that we will be proceeding along the normal course of events.
D Jorge can give you access to the beta version.
Alessia will probably be promoted.
Alessia will probably be promoted.
This question is taken from Busad 106 – Written Business Communication » Winter 2023 » Chapter 04 Aplia Assignment
