Fresh Grad Lands Job as Real Estate Agent With Help from Professional Writers

People go to websites to get the information they desperately need. They could be looking for an answer to a nagging question. They might be looking for help in completing an important task. For recent graduates, they might be looking for ways on how to prepare a comprehensive resume that can capture the attention of the hiring manager

Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent. While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume. Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity.

Thus, he sought our assistance in improving editing and proofreading his resume.

In revising his resume, iwritegigs highlighted his soft skills such as his communication skills, ability to negotiate, patience and tactfulness. In the professional experience part, our team added some skills that are aligned with the position he is applying for.

When he was chosen for the real estate agent position, he sent us this thank you note:

“Kudos to the team for a job well done. I am sincerely appreciative of the time and effort you gave on my resume. You did not only help me land the job I had always been dreaming of but you also made me realize how important adding those specific keywords to my resume! Cheers!

Manush’s story shows the importance of using powerful keywords to his resume in landing the job he wanted.

One sentence in the paragraph below has both a coherence issue (transition needed at the start of the sentence) and a support problem (specific details need to be added, either in the sentence itself or in a succeeding sentence). Which sentence needs both a transition and some details? 1I did not have a good experience at Lucky’s Bar & Grill last night. 2The service provided by our waiter was lousy. 3Also, the food was bad, which I discovered when I tasted my cold mashed potatoes. 4And finally, the bill came to 219 dollars for a mediocre dinner for two! 5I won’t ever go back there again.

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One sentence in the paragraph below has both a coherence issue (transition needed at the start of the sentence) and a support problem (specific details need to be added, either in the sentence itself or in a succeeding sentence). Which sentence needs both a transition and some details?
1I did not have a good experience at Lucky’s Bar & Grill last night. 2The service provided by our waiter was lousy. 3Also, the food was bad, which I discovered when I tasted my cold mashed potatoes. 4And finally, the bill came to 219 dollars for a mediocre dinner for two! 5I won’t ever go back there again.

A sentence #4

B sentence #3

C sentence #2

This question is taken from English 1A – Reading and Composition » Spring 2022 » Quiz 3 Essay Basics

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