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Fresh Grad Lands Job as Real Estate Agent With Help from Professional Writers

People go to websites to get the information they desperately need.  They could be looking for an answer to a nagging question.  They might be looking for help in completing an important task.  For recent graduates, they might be looking for ways on how to prepare a comprehensive resume that can capture the attention of the hiring manager

Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent.  While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume.  Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity. 

Thus, he sought our assistance in improving editing and proofreading his resume. 

In revising his resume, iwritegigs highlighted his soft skills such as his communication skills, ability to negotiate, patience and tactfulness.  In the professional experience part, our team added some skills that are aligned with the position he is applying for.

When he was chosen for the real estate agent position, he sent us this thank you note:

“Kudos to the team for a job well done.  I am sincerely appreciative of the time and effort you gave on my resume.  You did not only help me land the job I had always been dreaming of but you also made me realize how important adding those specific keywords to my resume!  Cheers!

Manush’s story shows the importance of using powerful keywords to his resume in landing the job he wanted.

The paragraph below lacks unity, because one sentence wanders from the main point. Which sentence should be deleted in order to fix the problem? 1I am currently learning how hard it is to work and go to school at the same time. 2Students like me, who want to make good grades but need to pay their own way, face tremendous burdens. 3For example, I work in an insurance office thirty hours a week, so each semester I have to maintain a tight schedule that allows me to attend classes and still be at my job when needed. 4This semester has been particularly challenging: I take an early-morning math class Monday through Thursday, then rush to get to work by 10 a.m., and by 6 p.m. on Wednesdays I’m back at school for a three-hour night class in statistics. 5Much to my chagrin, my Friday work/school schedule is even more difficult than my Monday through Thursday schedule. 6Fortunately, the people at my job are very pleasant, and some of us have become good friends. 7It’s hard for me to have a job while trying to earn my college degree, but when I graduate both will make me more employable.

Question
The paragraph below lacks unity, because one sentence wanders from the main point. Which sentence should be deleted in order to fix the problem?
1I am currently learning how hard it is to work and go to school at the same time. 2Students like me, who want to make good grades but need to pay their own way, face tremendous burdens. 3For example, I work in an insurance office thirty hours a week, so each semester I have to maintain a tight schedule that allows me to attend classes and still be at my job when needed. 4This semester has been particularly challenging: I take an early-morning math class Monday through Thursday, then rush to get to work by 10 a.m., and by 6 p.m. on Wednesdays I’m back at school for a three-hour night class in statistics. 5Much to my chagrin, my Friday work/school schedule is even more difficult than my Monday through Thursday schedule. 6Fortunately, the people at my job are very pleasant, and some of us have become good friends. 7It’s hard for me to have a job while trying to earn my college degree, but when I graduate both will make me more employable.
A  sentence #5
B  sentence #3
C  sentence #6
D  sentence #1
This question is taken from English 1A – Reading and Composition » Spring 2022 » Quiz 3 Essay Basics

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