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Fresh Grad Lands Job as Real Estate Agent With Help from Professional Writers

People go to websites to get the information they desperately need.  They could be looking for an answer to a nagging question.  They might be looking for help in completing an important task.  For recent graduates, they might be looking for ways on how to prepare a comprehensive resume that can capture the attention of the hiring manager

Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent.  While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume.  Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity. 

Thus, he sought our assistance in improving editing and proofreading his resume. 

In revising his resume, iwritegigs highlighted his soft skills such as his communication skills, ability to negotiate, patience and tactfulness.  In the professional experience part, our team added some skills that are aligned with the position he is applying for.

When he was chosen for the real estate agent position, he sent us this thank you note:

“Kudos to the team for a job well done.  I am sincerely appreciative of the time and effort you gave on my resume.  You did not only help me land the job I had always been dreaming of but you also made me realize how important adding those specific keywords to my resume!  Cheers!

Manush’s story shows the importance of using powerful keywords to his resume in landing the job he wanted.

GEM Quiz 3

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Below are the questions for the exam with the choices of answers:

Question #1
A  Some business messages may require sensitivity, and writers may choose to use passive-voice verbs in these cases.
B  Some business messages may require sensitivity and writers may choose to use passive-voice verbs in these cases.
C  Some business messages may require sensitivity and writers, may choose to use passive-voice verbs, in these cases.
Question #2
A  As a matter of fact, I saw my old boss last week.
B  As a matter of fact I saw my old boss, last week.
C  As a matter of fact I saw my old boss last week.
Question #3
A  The marketing executive said he was very impressed with the ad campaign.
B  The marketing executive said, “he was very impressed with the ad campaign.”
Question #4
A  We hired Sandy Cubberston, who was the applicant with the best qualifications as our new sales associate.
B  We hired Sandy Cubberston who was the applicant with the best qualifications, as our new sales associate.
C  We hired Sandy Cubberston, who was the applicant with the best qualifications, as our new sales associate.
Question #5
A  Our business was incorporated on July 1, 1986, in Corona, California, which is still the location of our headquarters.
B  Our business was incorporated on July 1, 1986 in Corona, California which is still the location of our headquarters.
C  Our business was incorporated on July 1, 1986, in Corona, California which is still the location of our headquarters.
Question #6
A  Will you please clear your desk before the test begins.
B  Will you please clear your desk before the test begins?
Question #7
A  boss’
B  bosses
C  boss’s
Question #8
A  My new cross-departmental project team consists of Myra Jones, Accounting, Kyle Bucci, Customer Service, and Petri Khosvow, Marketing.
B  My new cross-departmental project team consists of Myra Jones Accounting, Kyle Bucci Customer Service, and Petri Khosvow Marketing.
C  My new cross-departmental project team consists of Myra Jones, Accounting; Kyle Bucci, Customer Service; and Petri Khosvow, Marketing.
Question #9
A  My new company has offices in Dallas, Atlanta, and Boston.
B  My new company, has offices in, Dallas, Atlanta, and Boston.
C  My new company has offices in: Dallas, Atlanta, and Boston.
Question #10
A  Karla is going to go to the bookstore, and to Staples, to pick up supplies.
B  Karla is going to go to the bookstore, and to Staples to pick up supplies.
C  Karla is going to go to the bookstore and to Staples to pick up supplies.
Question #11
A  When I was vacationing in Denver, I saw John Elway a former Denver Bronco’s quarterback, and his wife at a restaurant.
B  When I was vacationing in Denver, I saw John Elway a former Denver Bronco’s quarterback and his wife at a restaurant.
C  When I was vacationing in Denver, I saw John Elway, a former Denver Bronco’s quarterback, and his wife at a restaurant.
Question #12
A  womens’
B  women’s
C  womens
Question #13
A  Marketing research firms are expensive; a single engagement can cost over $100,000.
B  Marketing research firms are expensive, furthermore a single engagement can cost over $100,000.
C  Marketing research firms are expensive, a single engagement can cost over $100,000.
Question #14
A  Last fall our company implemented policies regulating the use of cell phones, instant messaging and company e-mail.
B  Last fall our company implemented policies regulating the use of cell phones instant messaging and company e-mail.
C  Last fall our company implemented policies regulating the use of cell phones, instant messaging, and company e-mail.
Question #15
A  The test was very difficult, don’t you think.
B  The test was very difficult, don’t you think?
Question #16
A  employee’s
B  employees
C  employees’
Question #17
A  Companies find it difficult to name new products, consequently they often hire specialists.
B  Companies find it difficult to name new products; consequently, they often hire specialists.
C  Companies find it difficult to name new products, consequently, they often hire specialists.
Question #18
A  My former English Professor Shelly Pickford provided some helpful advice for my future college writing assignments.
B  My former English professor, Shelly Pickford, provided some helpful advice for my future college writing assignments.
C  My former English professor Shelly Pickford, provided some helpful advice for my future college writing assignments.
Question #19
A  Informal research methods include looking in company files, talking with your boss and interviewing the target audience.
B  Informal research methods include looking in company files, talking with your boss, and interviewing the target audience.
C  Informal research methods include looking in company files talking with your boss and interviewing the target audience.
Question #20
A  I have three things left to do print a copy of the report, create a cover page, and put everything in a folder.
B  I have three things left to do: print a copy of the report, create a cover page, and put everything in a folder.
C  I have three things left to do; print a copy of the report, create a cover page, and put everything in a folder.
Question #21
A  Cameron works at Western Digital Inc.
B  Cameron works at Western Digital Inc..
Question #22
A  I drove to the mountains, and I enjoyed a day of snowboarding.
B  I drove to the mountains and I enjoyed a day of snowboarding.
C  I drove to the mountains and I enjoyed a day, of snowboarding.
Question #23
A  Jonas thought that, the meeting was tomorrow and not today.
B  Jonas thought that the meeting was tomorrow, and not today.
C  Jonas thought that the meeting was tomorrow and not today.
Question #24
A  During his trip around the world, Richard stayed in Paris, France, Cape Town, South Africa, and Beijing, China.
B  During his trip around the world, Richard stayed in: Paris, France, Cape Town, South Africa, and Beijing, China.
C  During his trip around the world, Richard stayed in Paris, France; Cape Town, South Africa; and Beijing, China.
Question #25
A  The new office phones, which have many useful features will be installed, on Tuesday.
B  The new office phones which have many useful features, will be installed on Tuesday.
C  The new office phones, which have many useful features, will be installed on Tuesday.
Question #26
A  company’s
B  companies
C  companys
Question #27
A  The orientation is scheduled for Tuesday, April 28, 2012, and Wednesday, April 30, 2012.
B  The orientation is scheduled for Tuesday April 28, 2012, and Wednesday April 30, 2012.
C  The orientation is scheduled for Tuesday April 28, 2012 and Wednesday April 30, 2012.
Question #28
A  When you prepare to write any message you need to start by identifying your purpose.
B  When you prepare to write any message, you need to start by identifying your purpose.
C  When you prepare to write any message you need to start by, identifying your purpose.