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Fresh Grad Lands Job as Real Estate Agent With Help from Professional Writers

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Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent.  While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume.  Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity. 

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“Kudos to the team for a job well done.  I am sincerely appreciative of the time and effort you gave on my resume.  You did not only help me land the job I had always been dreaming of but you also made me realize how important adding those specific keywords to my resume!  Cheers!

Manush’s story shows the importance of using powerful keywords to his resume in landing the job he wanted.

Punctuation Review Quiz Midterm Part 1

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Below are the questions for the exam with the choices of answers:

Question #1
A  The word unique is frequently misused. 
B  The word unique is frequently misused.
C  The word “unique” is frequently misused. 
D  all of these
E  none of these
Question #2
A  My favorite writers are the following: Flannery O’Connor, David Desroches, and David Lodge. 
B  neither of these
C  My favorite writers are: Flannery O’Connor, David Desroches, and David Lodge. 
D  both of these
Question #3
A  none of these
B  No one expected her to buy a car, so we were quite, surprised when we discovered that she had bought two.
C  No one expected her to buy a car, so we were quite surprised when we discovered that she had bought two.
D  all of these
E  No one expected her to buy a car, so we were quite surprised when we discovered, that she had bought two.
Question #4
A  all of these
B  Heather Hardy, Ph.D., is the director of undergraduate studies in our department.
C  I just read the novel A Simple Plan. 
D  He had only one desire in life: to catch a ten-pound bass.
E  none of these
Question #5
A  Mary graduated in four years but she didn’t find a job immediately.
B  none of these
C  all of these
D  It was a large, black, Labrador retriever.
E  Mary who is my sister will be at the party too.
Question #6
A  colleges, which didn’t exist, prior to the 1950s have
B  colleges, which didn’t exist prior to the 1950s, have
C  no punctuation needed
D    
E  colleges which didn’t exist prior to the 1950s, have
Question #8
A  no punctuation needed
B  are Homicide, NYPD Blue, ER, and Chicago Hope
C  are; Homicide NYPD Blue ER and Chicago Hope
D  are: Homicide NYPD Blue ER and Chicago Hope
Question #9
A  what they wanted to hear, that he
B  what they wanted to hear; that he
C  what they wanted to hear: that he
D  no punctuation needed
Question #11
A  in Atlanta, Georgia, Boston, Massachusetts, and Phoenix, Arizona.
B  in Atlanta, Georgia; Boston, Massachusetts; and Phoenix, Arizona.
C  in Atlanta, Georgia; Boston, Massachusetts and; Phoenix, Arizona.
D  no punctuation needed
Question #15
A  Espinoza, who took her team to the Final Four last year might
B  Espinoza who took her team to the Final Four last year, might
C  Espinoza, who took her team to the Final Four last year, might
D  No punctuation needed
Question #16
A  My favorite pizza combinations are sausage, peppers, and onions; mushrooms, extra cheese, and anchovies; and hamburger, sun-dried tomatoes, pepperoni, and sliced red potatoes.
B  My favorite pizza combinations are: sausage, peppers, and onions, mushrooms, extra cheese, and anchovies, and hamburger, sun-dried tomatoes, pepperoni, and sliced red potatoes.
C    
D  My favorite pizza combinations are sausage peppers and onions mushrooms extra cheese and anchovies and hamburger sun-dried tomatoes pepperoni and sliced red potatoes.
Question #17
A  Believing in her own skills and possessing a supreme confidence, proved to make the difference in her campaign.
B  both options are incorrect
C  Believing in her own skills and possessing a supreme confidence proved to make the difference in her campaign.
Question #18
A  both options are incorrect
B  Raoul has been too busy to keep up with his courses because he took on too many extracurricular activities.
C  Raoul has been too busy to keep up with his courses, because he took on too many extracurricular activities.
Question #19
A  Given the hard choices our coach has had to make this year it’s no wonder she’s decided to retire.
B  Given the hard choices our coach has had to make this year, it’s no wonder she’s decided to retire.
C  both options are incorrect
Question #20
A  It seems a shame that a diligent, sincere politician like Fuentes should be ignored by shallow and thoughtlessly fickle voters.
B  It seems a shame that a diligent sincere politician like Fuentes should be ignored by shallow and thoughtlessly fickle voters.
C  It seems a shame that a diligent sincere politician like Fuentes should be ignored by shallow, and thoughtlessly fickle voters.
Question #21
A  My favorite teacher, who just happens to be my uncle retired from the university last summer.
B  My favorite teacher, who just happens to be my uncle, retired from the university last summer.
C  My favorite teacher who just happens to be my uncle, retired from the university last summer.
Question #22
A  Three major cities, Hartford, Bridgeport, and Stamford, make up the crucial voting blocks of Connecticut.
B  Three major cities Hartford Bridgeport and Stamford make up the crucial voting blocks of Connecticut.
C  Three major cities — Hartford, Bridgeport, and Stamford — make up the crucial voting blocks of Connecticut.
Question #23
A  The team’s major concerns this year, however, are: staying healthy, finding a good shooting guard, and maintaining good relations with the public.
B  The team’s major concerns this year; however, are — staying healthy, finding a good shooting guard, and maintaining good relations with the public.
C  The team’s major concerns this year, however, are staying healthy, finding a good shooting guard, and maintaining good relations with the public.
Question #24
A  Ms. Espinoza has offered to coach the team this year, however the competition for the job is intense.
B  Ms. Espinoza has offered to coach the team this year, however, the competition for the job is intense.
C  Ms. Espinoza has offered to coach the team this year; however, the competition for the job is intense.
Question #25
A  My first job in a factory involved the manufacture of escalator handles, and ketchup bottle lids.
B  both options are incorrect
C  My first job in a factory involved the manufacture of escalator handles and ketchup bottle lids.