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Fresh Grad Lands Job as Real Estate Agent With Help from Professional Writers

People go to websites to get the information they desperately need.  They could be looking for an answer to a nagging question.  They might be looking for help in completing an important task.  For recent graduates, they might be looking for ways on how to prepare a comprehensive resume that can capture the attention of the hiring manager

Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent.  While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume.  Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity. 

Thus, he sought our assistance in improving editing and proofreading his resume. 

In revising his resume, iwritegigs highlighted his soft skills such as his communication skills, ability to negotiate, patience and tactfulness.  In the professional experience part, our team added some skills that are aligned with the position he is applying for.

When he was chosen for the real estate agent position, he sent us this thank you note:

“Kudos to the team for a job well done.  I am sincerely appreciative of the time and effort you gave on my resume.  You did not only help me land the job I had always been dreaming of but you also made me realize how important adding those specific keywords to my resume!  Cheers!

Manush’s story shows the importance of using powerful keywords to his resume in landing the job he wanted.

Midterm

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Below are the questions for the exam with the choices of answers:

Question #2
A  40 words.
B  20 words.
C  10 words.
D  There is no limit.
Question #3
A  Thanking you in advance for sending a copy of the contract for installation of a new HVAC. 
B  I would appreciate receiving a copy of the contract for your proposed installation at your earliest possible convenience. 
C  We hope you can get our work completed in a timely manner. 
D  Please send a contract for heating and ventilation work by April 1 to allow installation to begin by April 15. 
Question #4
A  Analyze, anticipate, and adapt. 
B  Edit, proofread, and evaluate.
C  Writing, questioning, and guessing.
D  Researching, organizing, and drafting. 
Question #5
A  All of these
B  You may have a very important email going to a large group or your CEO.
C  You may be summarizing something in which you have worked very diligently. 
D  You may get passionate about something and want to fire back an email.
Question #6
A  Capture the reader’s attention and interest.
B  Cite facts, statistics, expert opinions, examples, and specific details to support her request.
C  Identify herself and her company.
D  Provide her telephone number.
Question #7
A  Eliminating unnecessary words like long lead-ins and words that add no value.  
B  Adapting a message to its audience.
C  Using positive language that avoids negative words.
D  Adding unnecessary words to a message to make it longer. 
Question #8
A  Prewriting, drafting, and revising. 
B  Analyze, anticipate, and adapt. 
C  Organize,research, and draft.
D  Edit, proofread, and evaluate. 
Question #9
A  Bad news, explanation, reasons, and closing
B  Buffer, reasons, bad news, and closing
C  Bad news, reasons, buffer, and closing
D  Buffer, explanation, reasons, and closing
Question #10
A  Subject, opening, body, and closing.
B  Subject, closing, body, opening.
C  Subject, closing, body, and opening.
D  Buffer, reasons, bad news, and closing.
Question #11
A  omit the sender’s name to avoid legal liability. 
B  avoid repeating the information provided or referring to its use.
C  provide specific details (time, date, etc.) if further action is required.
D  include familiar expressions such as “If I may be of further assistance, please don’t hesitate to call me.”
Question #12
A  Cape Consulting Inc. is the premier communication-consulting firm in the Cape and islands area.
B  Please answer the following questions about your Web services.
C  My name is Jill Aubrey, and I am the office manager for Cape Consulting Inc.
D  I recently read an article about your firm in the local newspaper.
Question #13
A  Buffer, reasons, bad news, and closing. 
B  Bad news, reasons, buffer, and closing.
C  Closing, buffer, bad news, and reasons. 
D  Buffer, bad news, reasons, and closing.
Question #14
A  If you have any further questions about this new benefits plan, please do not hesitate to contact me. 
B  Contacting me December 1st about your support of this new benefits plan will allow me to present this proposal at the next strategic planning session.
C  Please email me at your earliest convenience with your decision.
D  We really need to implement this new benefits plan soon. 
Question #15
A  permanency.
B  formality.
C  social media marketing.
D  length.
Question #16
A  Lists decrease the readability level of a document.
B  Lists allow readers to review main ideas quickly. Increase skim value.
C  Lists confuse readers because they are visually distracting.
D  Lists decrease a reader’s comprehension of the main ideas.
Question #17
A  Please refer back to the June financial statements.
B  Let’s not repeat our competitor’s mistakes.
C  It is absolutely essential that our accounting records are accurate.
D  I want to thank each and every stockholder.
Question #18
A  It was our one and only office manager who won the raffle.
B  Three candidates are running for the board.
C  There are three important issues that we can choose to discuss at today’s meeting.
D  There is only one job opening currently available.
Question #19
A  You may be interested to learn that we will send the information you requested.
B  Yes, we will send the information you requested.
C  This is to advise you that we will send the information you requested.
D  I am writing this letter to inform you that we will send the information you requested.
Question #20
A  uses slang and abbreviations to personalize the message.
B  dictates that all sentences be written as commands.
C  means that all messages are written in the active voice.
D  emphasizes second-person pronouns instead of first-person (I, we) pronouns.
Question #21
A  The board will conduct a discussion about the possible merger.
B  We will give serious consideration to your application.
C  We hope to discover the reason our profits are declining.
D  The task force reached a conclusion about how to improve morale.
Question #22
A  When a writer joins two independent clauses with a comma.
B  When modifiers must be close to the words they describe or limit. 
C  When language is sensitive and bias free.
D  When the same word type or tense is used in a list (i.e. walk, talk, run, not walking, talked, ran).
Question #23
A  presenting ideas requiring persuasion.
B  expecting the audience to be pleased, mildly interested, or neutral.
C  revealing sensitive news.
D  delivering bad news.
Question #24
A  Action, Introduce, Desire, and Action.
B  Analyze, Introduce, Demand, and Act.
C  Attention, Interest, Desire, and Action.
D  Anticipate, Interest, Desire, and Action.
Question #25
A  Create a numbered or bulleted list in the body of the letter. 
B  Email follow-up.
C  Paragraph.
D  Enclosure in a memo.