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Fresh Grad Lands Job as Real Estate Agent With Help from Professional Writers

People go to websites to get the information they desperately need.  They could be looking for an answer to a nagging question.  They might be looking for help in completing an important task.  For recent graduates, they might be looking for ways on how to prepare a comprehensive resume that can capture the attention of the hiring manager

Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent.  While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume.  Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity. 

Thus, he sought our assistance in improving editing and proofreading his resume. 

In revising his resume, iwritegigs highlighted his soft skills such as his communication skills, ability to negotiate, patience and tactfulness.  In the professional experience part, our team added some skills that are aligned with the position he is applying for.

When he was chosen for the real estate agent position, he sent us this thank you note:

“Kudos to the team for a job well done.  I am sincerely appreciative of the time and effort you gave on my resume.  You did not only help me land the job I had always been dreaming of but you also made me realize how important adding those specific keywords to my resume!  Cheers!

Manush’s story shows the importance of using powerful keywords to his resume in landing the job he wanted.

Diagnostic Essay

Topic: Diagnostic Essay

Instructions:

Write an expository essay of 5 paragraphs which includes introduction, body, and conclusion (900 words). Start with a hook of some sort or an anecdote and include a clear thesis statement that will become the driver or guide of your discussion.
Include examples from the posted diagnostic reading–link to article–and videos. And if you can, provide in-text citations of the examples that you use and include a Works Cited list at the end of the essay if you are familiar with how to document sources in MLA8 format.
Topic question:
Do animals have the ability to communicate and express emotions as humans do? Explain your point of view and provide supporting examples from any readings and videos from this module.
Rubric
Diagnostic Essay
Diagnostic Essay
Criteria
Ratings
Pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeContent + word count over 900 words
50.0 pts
Well developed with several examples

25.0 pts
Developed but with few examples

0.0 pts
Vague and no specific examples

50.0 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeProofreading + editing for grammar, spelling, missing words
25.0 pts
Clearly proofread and edited

10.0 pts
Proofread with errors

0.0 pts
No evidence of proofreading

25.0 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeMLA Formatting of essay and citations
25.0 pts
Attempts to follow MLA guidelines

0.0 pts
No attempt to follow MLA guidelines

25.0 pts
Total Points: 100.0