Fresh Grad Lands Job as Real Estate Agent With Help from Professional Writers

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Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent.  While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume.  Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity. 

Thus, he sought our assistance in improving editing and proofreading his resume. 

In revising his resume, iwritegigs highlighted his soft skills such as his communication skills, ability to negotiate, patience and tactfulness.  In the professional experience part, our team added some skills that are aligned with the position he is applying for.

When he was chosen for the real estate agent position, he sent us this thank you note:

“Kudos to the team for a job well done.  I am sincerely appreciative of the time and effort you gave on my resume.  You did not only help me land the job I had always been dreaming of but you also made me realize how important adding those specific keywords to my resume!  Cheers!

Manush’s story shows the importance of using powerful keywords to his resume in landing the job he wanted.

Resume of Nazanin Rahat

(949)382-4364 | nrahat@uci.edu | 1285 Hamal | Irvine CA 92618
๏University of California Irvine , Ayala School of Biological Sciences. 2017-2020
– Human biology, B.S.
๏Irvine Valley College 2015-2017
– Biological Sciences
๏American Heart Association 2019
– CPR , BLS, AED Certification
๏Coastline college 2016
– Medical Assistant Certification
– Medical biller and management Certification
– EMT ( Emergency Medical Technician) Certification
– ECG Certification
๏University High school 2015
– Diploma
Research assistant and student scholar
University of California Irvine, school of medicine Dec2018-Present
• Develop and direct research activities independently including data collection, evaluation and analysis
• Prepare and submit lab and clinical reports and grant applications
• Perform administrative work in support of research objective
• Personal dedication to the success of the pre-clinical curriculum
• Encourage feedback from course faculty and coordinators; other course and block directors, thread directors and
discipline directors, and students and administrators in order to improve the course
• Promote a collegial learning environment that respects and values all members.
Tutor May2014- Present
Algebra,Calculus, physics, biology , General Chemistry,Organic Chemistry, biochemistry, Biology, Genetics, Psychology
• More than 5 years experience of tutoring in diverse science subjects.
• Friendly, energetic and professional.
• Exam preparation and subject review.
• Improving student grades and advancing their knowledge.
• Building student’s self-confident and creating short and long term goals.
• Creating action plans based on the student and their school academic goals.
• Engage students in creative activities for more effective learning.
• provide quizzes to asses student’s learning process.
American Red Cross Oct. 2017-Present
• Administer first-aid treatment and life-support care to sick or injured persons in prehospital setting.
• Operate equipment such as EKGs, external defibrillators and bag-valve mask resuscitators in advanced life-support environments.
• Assess nature and extent of illness or injury to establish and prioritize medical procedures.
• Maintain vehicles and medical and communication equipment, and replenish first-aid equipment and supplies.
• Observe, record, and report to physician the patient’s condition or injury, the treatment provided, and reactions to drugs and
Coastal Primary Care , Kazy Rezaei, D.O. | Huntington beach , CA May. 2017-Present
Clinical Assistant
• Ensures that all patients on schedule are accounted for and communicate with providers/patients and colleagues
as to approximate wait times
• Obtains and records vital signs, pain screens, weights and heights accurately into Longitudinal Medical Records.
• Reports changes and/or abnormalities in vital signs
• Provides proactive instruction and time expectations to patient and family
• Assist with medical record preparation
• Maintains a working knowledge of current computer systems used in clinical areas
Razi Pharmacy | Mission Viejo, CA March. 2016 – Jun 2017
Pharmacy Technician
• Helps health care providers and patients by greeting them.
• Answering questions and requests; referring inquiries to the pharmacist.
• Maintains pharmacy inventory by checking pharmaceutical stock to determine inventory level.
• Anticipating needed medications and supplies; placing and expediting orders; verifying receipt; removing outdated drugs.
• Organizes medications for pharmacist to dispense
• Preparing labels; calculating quantities; assembling intravenous solutions and other pharmaceutical therapies.
• Maintains records by recording and filing physicians’ orders and prescriptions.
• Ensures medication availability by delivering medications to patients and departments.
• Prepares reports by collecting and summarizing information.
• Contributes to team effort by accomplishing related results as needed.
Dr. Shahla Rah Medical Office | Irvine , CA Sep. 2015 – March. 2016
Medical Assistant
• Documentation and Chart-keeping.
• Record & update patient information into database,
• appointment scheduling and follow-up.
• Administer patient blood & urine samples and prepare for lab processing.
• Liaise with insurance providers
• Maintained & cleaned exam room and all medical equipment
• Took & recorded patient vital signs & biopsies, including blood pressure and heart rate.
• Shadowed Doctor Kazy Rezaei • Shadowed Dr. Farnoosh Tinoosh. • Voluntary work in Iranian-American women association. • Volunteer work in Hell Ahmar.
• Strong analytical skills, problem solving skills, attention to details, ability to balance multiple tasks.
• Proficient in Word, and PowerPoint; Intermediate in Excel.
• Knowledge of legislative, regulatory, legal, and practice issues affecting the profession of physical therapy
• Multilingual . ( Farsi, Arabic, English)
• well-round pre-medicine graduate with great medicinal knowledge and experience of multiple clinical settings, roles and
• Excellent communication skills , Friendly and caring.
• Responsible and on-time.
• Willing to learn at all time.
• Highly motivated, accurate and detail oriented with the proven ability to think innovatively toward solving problems
effectively and efficiently
• Doctor Shahla Rah, MD.
(949)382-4364 |113 Waterworks way, suite 314, Irvine, CA 92618
• Doctor Farnoosh Tinoosh, MD (Eye physician and surgeon)
(714) 424-9955 | 1503 S Coast Dr #120, Costa Mesa, CA 92626
• Kambiz Ghojevand, Pharmacist
(949) 583-7292 | 23162 Los Alisos Blvd # 102A, Mission Viejo, CA 92691
• Mrs. vicky Popovichi (medical assistant instructor)
(714)979-1955 | 1001 Presidio Square, Costa Mesa, CA 92626 |Vpopvicky@coastlinerop.net
• Erica Martin (English professor)
(949)654-1776 | 4771 Campus Drive ,Irvine ,CA 92620