Fresh Grad Lands Job as Real Estate Agent With Help from Professional Writers

People go to websites to get the information they desperately need.  They could be looking for an answer to a nagging question.  They might be looking for help in completing an important task.  For recent graduates, they might be looking for ways on how to prepare a comprehensive resume that can capture the attention of the hiring manager

Manush is a recent graduate from a prestigious university in California who is looking for a job opportunity as a real estate agent.  While he already has samples provided by his friends, he still feels something lacking in his resume.  Specifically, the he believes that his professional objective statement lacks focus and clarity. 

Thus, he sought our assistance in improving editing and proofreading his resume. 

In revising his resume, iwritegigs highlighted his soft skills such as his communication skills, ability to negotiate, patience and tactfulness.  In the professional experience part, our team added some skills that are aligned with the position he is applying for.

When he was chosen for the real estate agent position, he sent us this thank you note:

“Kudos to the team for a job well done.  I am sincerely appreciative of the time and effort you gave on my resume.  You did not only help me land the job I had always been dreaming of but you also made me realize how important adding those specific keywords to my resume!  Cheers!

Manush’s story shows the importance of using powerful keywords to his resume in landing the job he wanted.

AMCAS Admission of Nazanin Rahat

  • Teaching/Tutoring/Teaching Assistant tutoring —— 557

as a math and science tutor, I’ve worked with over a hundred of student using different techniques based on their specific learning type, not only to help them understand science but also build confidence in applying their knowledge to different problems. I would structure my lessons in a pattern that would encourage comprehension and creativity over memorization to improve problem-solving skills and avoid passive learning. I also helped them to stay motivated by setting short and long term goal and create action plans based on their school academic goals.


  • Research/Lab ————– 570 Undergraduate research assistant

Electroacupuncture (EA) stimulation has shown mediating effect in lowering blood pressure in mild hypertensive patients. During my research in Longhurst lab, we conducted a series of experiments to investigate how the duration of stimulation can alter the magnitude of influence on lowering blood pressure. This opportunity has helped me to deepen my understanding of integrative medicine while helping me develop essential skills for working in a research team. These skills include how to conduct controlled experiment, record & analyze data and evaluate findings based on previously published literature.



Volunteer- addiction medicine office – dr kazy rezaee, DO

Volunteering in an addiction treatment clinic has helped me to become patient and more understanding to patients. I encountered individuals seeking medical help to fight their ego & win back their independence. Each of the individual is striving to obtain sympathy, care & love to remind them the beauty that life has to offer & to give them hope that they are capable of transforming their entire life. Knowing how small things such as a warm smile or a listing earcan help patients,  I see to it that I make an effort to comfort them In between therapy sessions. The stories they share have helped me realize how grateful I am to have these unearned kinds of blessing.


Medical assistant – universal vison – Dr farnoosh tinoosh

My experience as a medical assistant working closely with a physician for about a year has provided me with essential skills such as: recording and updating patient’s information into the chart, obtaining vital signs, knowing the chief complaint, concerns & allergies, and preparing reports by summarizing the information discussed during the patient’s visit. Being able to watch how the physician interacts with his patients has helped me understand and know how to establish rapport with patients and establish a physician-patient relationship.




  • Pharmacy technician ——– 660

Working as a pharmacy technician has helped me familiarize with more than hundreds of medications, their names and generics as well as their usage & class. I was also trained to do tasks such as filling & preparing sent prescriptions, obtaining physician authorization to refill medication, communicating with insurance providers and send bills, calculating copays, updating patients’ drug history & checking for generic medications. This job greatly helped me with my knowledge in pharmacology as I learned the common drugs prescribed for a specific disease. This experience also made me want to be more aware of the inefficiencies and lapses within the healthcare system.



  • American Red Cross Oct. 2017-Present Ambassador

My experience as a volunteer blood donor ambassador has helped me hone my interpersonal skills as I continuously talk to the donors to ensure that they are treated well and with utmost respect. Moreover, Volunteer blood donor ambassadors guarantee that blood donors will have a pleasant and fulfilling experience, from the moment they arrive to the moment they leave. During a blood drive, whether you’re greeting donors, answering questions or thanking them for their donation, your courtesy and professionalism are important to create a favorable impression that  would encourage them to keep supporting the project.



  • EMR

My training as an emergency medical responder has been an eye opener to me because I have witnessed how a matter of seconds can save a patient’s life.  I have exercised my alertness and grace under pressure in life and death situations. I also learned how to effectively integrate my knowledge to plan and execute actions as quickly and accurately as possible. Moreover, I learned that every member of the team contributes an invaluable skillset, essential to the success of the department. I empathized with the patients to develop their trust and be comfortable with our team. I have learned to be passionate with my job and compassionate to my patients by working in this challenging position.



Iranian-American Women Foundation

The IAWF Foundation has internship opportunities available to active mentees. Interns will work with our community development team our Irvine, CA office and we offer full-time and part-time positions lasting 10-12 weeks. IAWF will assist in helping students receive credit for their internship and bridge the gap between academic and professional applied practices.


Our vision is a world where every woman realizes her full potential and joins forces to positively impact our global community.


 the Iranian American Women Foundation (IAWF) has set the stage to empower and inspire Iranian American women of all ages and career paths through its nationally recognized annual Women’s Leadership Conferences. Thanks to the efforts of the community, the IAW Foundation has expanded its philanthropic efforts to include a variety of programs to benefit the community it is serving. IAWF’s programs include the Circle of Visionaries, the Circle of Caring, the Youth Leadership Conference, and the Mentorship to Internship program. The goal is to provide a platform for IAWF members to expand on their professional and personal growth. We encourage potential members of IAWF and our local chapters’ community members to join us on this journey.



  • ASG outreach chair Leadership

As a student at Irvine Valley College, I held a leadership position in Associated Student Government. My position was Outreach Coordinator, but I extended my role by keeping our committee active and organizing more group activities. I planned a Christmas donation drive for children, cultural ceremonies, and other events for students. I also planned retreats and leadership camps for student campus leaders. I also went to freshman classes and spoke to them about the opportunities they have in campus, and gave an insight into how they can succeed. Through this experience, I realized that if I push myself to the limit, I can be a good leader and be of great help to other people.




International Mathematics Competition

in high school, our school participated in both physics and IMC ( International Math Competition) and they selected me as their representative. I attended many review meetings and presented the goals of our group. I also arranged all the student meetings and helped to provide required materials. I also arranged meetings between the professors and students in order for them to share their ideas and learn from each other. This experience has taught me a lot of new skills such as being more settled and organized in the things that I do and faithful and devoted to my goals.


Type: Teaching/Tutoring/Teaching Assistant

I served as a Teaching Assistant (TA) for Mathematics and General Chemistry. As a TA, I attended class with the students, graded assignments, and held office hours and study sessions. Through my position as a TA, I learned patience and worked with each student at his or her own pace. I came up with new ways to explain concepts that were suited to each student’s learning style. Their responsiveness and the look on their faces when they first understood a concept was the most rewarding aspect of the job. I will strive to facilitate patient education as a physician, making sure that a patient leaves the clinic well informed with all of their questions answered regarding their healthcare needs.